A Farmer's Life Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Farmer's Life

Rating: 4.9


Dust settles and hides
In his hair and forehead.
It travels to his face
When he perspires profusely.
He has no time to spare for himself.
Dark clouds loom over the field.


Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 January 2022

Fabulous image and representation of an honest farmer.......top marks surely.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 January 2022

A poem so close to my heart, dearest Rose. A farmer toils from sunrise to sunset without realising the sweat and blood given to Mother earth.

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 January 2022

Part 2…. When I read this marvellous poem, I am reminded of a famous story from the epics, Lord Mahavishnu and Sage Narada appear beside the protagonist, an unknown farmer. I shall try to tell you this story some day.

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Unnikrishnan E S 05 January 2022

A farmer has no time to spare, for the crops on his field demand his attention 24x7. I am a farmer myself and I know. Thank you, Rose Marie for understanding a farmer's woes. Nice one. Top score and myfav

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Chinedu Dike 05 January 2022

Insightful, profound, clear, focused and factual. Great lines of poetry. Thanks for sharing, Rose. Remain enriched.

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Rob Lamberton 28 December 2022

Sounds like you may have lived on a farm?

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Soran M. H 09 January 2022

He has no time to spare for himself. Dark clouds loom over the field.

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Soran M. H 09 January 2022

A wonderful poetic image that leaves the farmer between the pincers of toil and the vicissitudes of the terrain and the atmosphere. Rose is always close to nature and its contents, a brilliant poet.

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Kevin Patrick 08 January 2022

They are the most important figures who keep our civilized world going, they feed our cities and yet get little reward. A fantastic celebration!

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Susan Williams 06 January 2022

Now that is capturing the truth of a human life through the snapshots of him hard at work---dang, that's the way to deal life truth's through poetry.. much more than a 5 star poem, deserves best poem status. You let the character of the man speak for itself---awesome! To MY Favorites!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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