With just a handful of barren land,
And tottering dreams based on the sand.
Yet the desire continued to bloom,
To produce the green out of the doom.
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Your poem is touching. Thanks for sharing.............................mandara
This is a subject close to my heart, an which I have evoked in my work. Thanks for taking it up with such sensitivity.
This is a beautiful feeling for the farmer. True the farmer, toils so hard, does not have high expectations, but he is the person who provides the most important product, food for our survival. But sadly he doesn't get his due. He needs to be supported and adviced for he has that will to work very hard and a heart of gold. Nice write 10+++
another, beautiful and caring poem from you.you have a beautiful mind vaibhav, which feels for the poor and downtrodden.keep up your good work.
Farmars's fantasy is not only a fantasy, they wish it come true every night..
The Indian farmers are still dependent on vagaries of Indian monsoon! The Leftist party after coming to power in W.Bengal, had started a movement which made many to sell off the lands at a reduced price to farmers! The slogan was that the land must belong to the tillers of the soil! I do not know about other states! But I feel the lot for the farmers did not improve very much! ! ! A nice poem! 10++ -Raj Nandy
Quite natural a farmer's fantasy...and you've said it very well...great write10+++
A farmer's fantacy, a handful of seeds is blooming in this poem. Wonderful poem, Vaibhav. Short but very expressive and effective......10/10. Keep up the good work. Best Wishes Naseer
Your penning in i's breity summarizes the passion and hope that a farmer has...encapsulatig his dreams in but a few lines...Brao
A farmer's life is one of toil but ultimately very rewarding. Great little poem. Best wishes, Andrew
A wonderful profession and one that is so gratifying. I felt that as I wrote my poem, A Farmer's Prayer. Best Wishes, Marilyn
wekk rhymed and well structured. farmer's destitudes well pictured. shan
an impressive write...good short poem and rhymes..a tribute to farmers..
Just think how wonderful it would be, to be a farmer of plenty. Sow the world with love; and reap the fields of plenty. And going to sleep at night knowing their is no hunger child. Vailbhav my friend you have a magical touch with poetry 10+++++
Tes; that is his life fantasiced! Nice thinking and expression!
It must be very rewarding to be a farmer, a very well written piece, thanks, 10 Lynda xx
Dear Vaibhav, Welcome to our farmers' world with this very beautiful and touching poem. I started taking up social issues with farmers only from my earlier poems HONORABLES and THAT RAINY DAY. The more and more we get deep into subject, we see more pain and so many tears rolling; the real place where a poet has to dwell.Very well done. Excellent poem
Farmers who toil are the salt of the earth yuor poem the pepper of thought +++10 regards