Friday, January 3, 2003

A Farewell Comments

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My fairest child, I have no song to give you;
No lark could pipe to skies so dull and grey:
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Charles Kingsley
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Ruth Hamill 10 September 2020

65 years ago, my mother wrote this poem (second half) in my autograph book and I never really understood it. I was 11 or 12 and was just glad to have her handwriting because she died all too soon of cancer when I was 12. It makes more sense to see it in context with other's remarks. I appreciate it all the more now and will be sure to pass it on when my grandsons have daughters (soon I hope!) . The sentiment is beautiful.

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Rajnish Manga 11 August 2020

Sweet and lovely advice from a father to his loving daughter. Quite inspiring. Thanks.

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N Wright 17 December 2019

This poem is in the book " Best Loved Poems of the American People" by HAZEL FELLEMAN.I have had this book of poems for nearly 50 years-it is a treasure! My grandmother used to recite this poem me.

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Chris Yexley 27 June 2019

A primary school teacher wrote the first line of this in my autograph book over 50 years ago, and I have only just by accident found it’s source! At the time I was very upset, I didn’t want to be good, but to be clever! I’ve always remembered it and have spent my life ignoring the advice!

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Captain Clegg 20 January 2019

What's the occasion of the parting? The advice is almost like the idea (I think echoed by Nietzsche?) that one should live one's life as though crafting a work of art. Difficult to do on a monday morning in January, when everyone is being grumpy... But not a bad idea

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Patricia Jones 01 January 2019

My late Mum wrote this poem in my autograph book when I was quite young,Words that touch the heart.

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Jan gilmour 08 February 2019

My mum did exactly the same and I still have my autograph book with it in now passing it on to my lovely great granddaughter Isobella for her memories box for when she is eighteen we will be gone by then

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Barbara May 19 December 2018

What terrible dispiriting advice to a clever girl. Typical Victorian paternalistic drivel.

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Captain Clegg 20 January 2019

I must say your ideological bias is so subtle! Almost impossible to detect, forsooth. And so unusual, so original! All extremely welcome in a discussion of a poem is that enough sarcasm? I think so

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Joe Fogey 29 November 2018

In my experience sweet maids can be both clever and good.

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Georgina 22 April 2018

In 1967 as I left for college my mom quoted two lines from this...I searched now and have tears...

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Angela Lavelle 11 March 2018

My mum used to recite this to my sister and me as we headed off to school every morning. Now I recite it to my daughter.

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Amar Agarwala 25 February 2017

I find this poem more of an elegy... sweet and short.

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Ranak Zaman 25 February 2017

beautiful poem. I liked it. thank you.

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Tom Allport 25 February 2017

a beautifully given advice poem? rings true to day!

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Indira Renganathan 25 February 2017

A good advice from a good father...but it stirs one's heart as it sounds dolorous too....a touching poem

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 February 2017

Sweet maid! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 February 2017

One lesson i can give you.... thanks for sharing...

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Jan 78 01 January 2019

I love this poem which my mother always wrote for us as a keep sake I now have to write for my lovely just one year old great grand daughter her parents are collecting a memory's box for when she is eighteen we will not be there to see this but feel this poem is how we would have said to her about her future

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Isabel X 24 February 2016

Never mind your wishes Just go and wash the dishes (Don't know how to correct the errors this iPad insists upon making)

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Isabel X 24 February 2016

Let me defend the dreamer. For me this is a poem counsel of despair: NEVER Met ND YOUR WISHES JUST GO AND WASH THE DISHES.

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M Asim Nehal 16 February 2016

Sweet song, indeed....enjoyed your farewell note,

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Susan Williams 18 December 2015

The greatest wish a father could have for his child- that the child live his morals not merely mouth them

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