A Far Away Star... Comments

No words describe you words but i want to say i love your words Nice Nice words

this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]

this is a great poem to read, its short and nice, loved it thanks =]

This poem is OK for me. You are the star.

Very tender write! Nice Job! ! ! ! 10+

a starry question...no; an offer a sweet bargain! ...10

How sweet...you can as well say a hi...sweet poem10+++++++

a nice little poem to read. always remember that everyone has something to offer. you can pray for some one's kindness. can't you? ? ?

You can offer a lot Hataw Muhamad, words which are brighter than stars and moon. Nice little poem. Keep on writing!

I still wonder what makes a poet.. this clarified it a little bit for me.. it is the ability to look a a blank sheet of paper and see words... or to take a handful of soil and it in see worlds.. thats what you did... ciao Leslie

hey a nice small and cute one far away star are you indeed ++10 anju

The Italian childhood textbooks often report a short composition that the poet Aldo Palazzeschi wrote about a very little village. He wrote that that village had a very little star whole for it, and concluded: 'I wonder whether even a big town has it.'

Lovely love poem with innocent emotion. 10+

``in the heart of the sky, i am there, , there to be between the stars and close to you.. to give you the light, and warm poetic feelings..`` well, , , so stunning what your pen penned.. beautiful dear sweet arabian girl.. yours... hazem al..

great poem Hataw, I see hope here and poem has written when the mind is clear. i like it so much dear, well-done

Love to look at the stars, both near and far, beautiful they are... Great write Hataw.. got to be 10 for my friend... Andy

This is thoughtful indeed Allegorically meaningfull 10+++ as always

Venus is gracing the firmament this October, westbound; and if that's what this is about, I saw you yesterday... Brightest thing in the sky these days. Right above the head will be Jupiter, I was told... Also brighter than the average. What do you mean you got nothing to offer? ? ? That's okay! Matter of fact,10 is coming your way...

a great concept...attractiveness..rich vs poor..inquisitive to be liked even had nothing to offer...nice one...A10

You star you hav your own brightness without moon-lit in the dark sky sparkling!