A Fantasy Comments

Spare, elegant lines inviting to deep meditation.

a wonderful piece of work. Very nicely done!

I have dreams that seem so real. Now, I wrote a story but, it is far too long so, I changed it in to a poem and put it on this site. It’s called balloon lady. Please check it out if you will and tell what you think. Oh, and if you like fantasy have a look at, I went to a ball. I like the opening. I heard bluebell chime magic.10 for you from me! ! !

...a fine composition indeed......10

I always have fantasy in my dreams a good one. Lovely poem.

Beautiful and fluent.. and who is say, what is reality, and what is illusion? ! Many thanks John.

This is my kind of poetry Fantasy is preferable to reality at least some of he time

This is a gem, John...and the second stanza simply glows with literary craft and metaphors. Nice job. Keep dreaming (and share.) Raynette

Your second verse made me think of Yeats with the witches and the rituals ('Easter: 1916' in particular) . That's a good thing. I thought the last line was a tad on the 'purple' side but otherwise this is a fine poem.