A Fantasy Comments

Wow..! ! what a colourful portrayal of the wonderful love of Radha-Krishna.....beautiful poem that makes me read it again and again...you seem to be a poet by birth Valsa...God bless you- 100

Your passionate breath spewed and your smile embalmed my bruised spirit, Communication between Radha and Krishna is beautifully narrated in this brilliantly perceived poem. Tender flow of this poem brightens up life's moment entirely.10

Sailing in a dream! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa.

Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa.

Simply profound and overwhelming...........Valsa.........the imagination touching sky and beyond......with beautiful, alluring words..................

I was browsing through your poems to find some thing to read and found this gem. Loved every thing about the fantasy. Beautiful write.

I was browsing through your poems to find some thing to read and found this gem. Loved every thing about the fantasy. Beautiful write.

Your amorous whispers fell in my ears *with the sweetness of the melody from Krishna's flute with Radha near, love sick her lips curled in an immaculate smile. Lovely poem, specially the above lines.

Truly you write so very beautifully x

What an illusory encounter! A desolate heart yearning.... Beautiful write!

Excellent poem. The poet's note is great too.

A beautiful poetic expression of love in a fantasy..... just awesome.

a beautiful poem about fantasy. great imagery.

Breathtaking! Complex. Delicate. precise imaging & cadence. subtle, jarring. masterful weaving. just the first impressions of a drop-in.

I really adore this poem, fantasy at it's best. Thanks

A fantastic poem about fantasy- -The romance of Radha and Krishna is well imagined and rendered.!

Radha and Krishna are according to Indian philosophy, Prakiti and Purush, Atma and Paramatma. Radha's love for Krishna is meant to be one with Paramatma. Very nice maam.

Romantically piece of written.so fascinating I know nothin about Radhika and Krishna in the Hinduism.but i searched a little about it.what i learn from it, is that Radha was Krishna's lover or as it is written Atma Tu Radhika Tasya which u know the meaning better than me. I believe that we can learn alot from their love and relationship.the impression that a lover could have on his/her mate.Their relationship or the impressions on their eachother's minds. In our tradition poetry we have the same poems and the stories about lovers like (Shirin and Farhad) or (Lyla and Majnoon) . I learned alot from this poem.\\\\Muchas gracias for sharing cheers

The very development of thoughts and crafting of the stanzas excel here and this poem is a feather to your cap of poetic exuberance. The profusion of the poetic devices has a great level of aptness over here. Even the poets from the lands where English is the first language may learn a lot from your poems of this kind, Madam Valsa...