Monday, October 8, 2012

A Fantasy Comments

Rating: 4.9

Dozing on a hammock
Strung between two towering pines
With the sky above-
colour washed in turquoise blue
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Valsa George
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Indira Renganathan 08 January 2019

Wow..! ! what a colourful portrayal of the wonderful love of Radha-Krishna.....beautiful poem that makes me read it again and again...you seem to be a poet by birth Valsa...God bless you- 100

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

Your passionate breath spewed and your smile embalmed my bruised spirit, Communication between Radha and Krishna is beautifully narrated in this brilliantly perceived poem. Tender flow of this poem brightens up life's moment entirely.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 11 November 2016

Sailing in a dream! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajesh.c Bose 29 October 2014

Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa.

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Rajesh.c Bose 29 October 2014

Poetry comes first.. words follow... ur every inch a poet Valsa.

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Simply profound and overwhelming...........Valsa.........the imagination touching sky and beyond......with beautiful, alluring words..................

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Savita Tyagi 18 June 2014

I was browsing through your poems to find some thing to read and found this gem. Loved every thing about the fantasy. Beautiful write.

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Savita Tyagi 18 June 2014

I was browsing through your poems to find some thing to read and found this gem. Loved every thing about the fantasy. Beautiful write.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 June 2014

Your amorous whispers fell in my ears *with the sweetness of the melody from Krishna's flute with Radha near, love sick her lips curled in an immaculate smile. Lovely poem, specially the above lines.

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Gnossienne 21 April 2014

Truly you write so very beautifully x

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Paul Sebastian 14 April 2014

What an illusory encounter! A desolate heart yearning.... Beautiful write!

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Padmanabhan Ananth 06 January 2014

Excellent poem. The poet's note is great too.

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Amitava Sur 21 November 2013

A beautiful poetic expression of love in a fantasy..... just awesome.

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Heather Wilkins 02 June 2013

a beautiful poem about fantasy. great imagery.

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Doug Bentley 23 April 2013

Breathtaking! Complex. Delicate. precise imaging & cadence. subtle, jarring. masterful weaving. just the first impressions of a drop-in.

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Patricia Grantham 20 February 2013

I really adore this poem, fantasy at it's best. Thanks

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Chandra Thiagarajan 10 February 2013

A fantastic poem about fantasy- -The romance of Radha and Krishna is well imagined and rendered.!

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Neela Nath Das 12 November 2012

Radha and Krishna are according to Indian philosophy, Prakiti and Purush, Atma and Paramatma. Radha's love for Krishna is meant to be one with Paramatma. Very nice maam.

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Nader Baheri 19 October 2012

Romantically piece of written.so fascinating I know nothin about Radhika and Krishna in the Hinduism.but i searched a little about it.what i learn from it, is that Radha was Krishna's lover or as it is written Atma Tu Radhika Tasya which u know the meaning better than me. I believe that we can learn alot from their love and relationship.the impression that a lover could have on his/her mate.Their relationship or the impressions on their eachother's minds. In our tradition poetry we have the same poems and the stories about lovers like (Shirin and Farhad) or (Lyla and Majnoon) . I learned alot from this poem.\\\\Muchas gracias for sharing cheers

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The very development of thoughts and crafting of the stanzas excel here and this poem is a feather to your cap of poetic exuberance. The profusion of the poetic devices has a great level of aptness over here. Even the poets from the lands where English is the first language may learn a lot from your poems of this kind, Madam Valsa...

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