Saturday, August 1, 2009

A Fantasy Comments

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somebody please
just free me from the nonsense
maybe to being unconscious
cuz maybe unconscious can take me to a place where i can become conscious
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jeffrey knox
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Stephanie Starr 01 August 2009

Ohh i like this poem! It's dark and bright, exotic and evil at the same time, with shades of grey. Keep writing, you have talent.

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