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Very beautiful poem... Ah, hadyou but held me in your hands Like the newspaper Read my eyes With thesame eagerness And would not let me go, Before you finished reading.... So lovely....thanks

Humor is pleasantly deployed to convey sensual frustration - a good formula!

(cont.) HERE: Ah, had you held me...i think one would be a fairly sophisticated reader of English to understand that the sentence WILL be complete after the word reading. but i think it would be clearer (to me at least) if you had put but after you: Ah, had you but held me.... i wonder how an English teacher would explain that sentence's structure. bri :)

STOP being so good in writing this gem! ! ! stop, Stop, STOP! ! ! i rarely use the word i shall put at the end of this sentence, but i must say i have found this to be FANTASTIC! and probably it DOES qualify as a fantasy. yes, you do have dream as one topic. to MyPoemList. will you have an Odia translation for THIS ONE? (cont.)

What a great concept, Bharati! I like it! For you take something so common to express a longing entirely original in my experience. Cool! Hoping this finds you well, Glen

The poet has nicely unfolded his thought. This is a beautiful poem emphasized eagerness and attention on important things for a special bonding. I love this masterpiece of the poet. The poem deserves +++++10. Thanks for sharing.

I think o poetess this is ur bestest uncomparable look into your eyes

and i always forget to give 100000+++++++++++++ pots to thee PH do see

What a great desire you exhibit You are running faster than I am flying a danseuse that you be do read my latest imagery of what is life what poetry is You may appreciate it as an imaginative simile poetess ye be great poetess are ye what a delight to read thee! ! !

Now that makes me give a romantic sigh.... many a woman would give anything if her man gave her such passionate attention as he gives his bowling ball or motorcycle or favorite dinner! Love this write, Bharati, and I cannot imagine a man ignoring your sweet self! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++

This is the secret wish of every wife..... or woman! We all long to be looked into our eyes to be read inside out! A deep understanding of the partner cements marital relationships! This poem is equally applicable to all relationships!

A beautiful metaphorical poem on love. A beloved is hauntingly compared with newspaper which is so amusing. Let it be quoted....Ah, had you held me in your hands Like the newspaper Read my eyes With same eagerness And would not let me go, Before you finished reading! ! ! Thanks.10

Like the newspaper/Read my eyes/With same eagerness........sweet romantic expression! A cute poem! Loved reading it....10

finish not before the close of the news so as your poems from top to bottom And again bottom to top till it reveals the irony of life between the lines - thanks for sharing this beautiful idea of human relation! !

Hi Bharati, Marvellous poem. Effectively expresses the fading love life in the marital relationship (although the poet has not written so in so many words) . Touching the heart, due to its closeness to reality. A 100+++++

Quite romantic! Thanks for sharing!

great love, I love it, go on..