Wednesday, March 20, 2013

A Family's Unique Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was a declared holiday
The children two were sleeping away
The grand-dad had no such special day
He was in his usual early morn's walk way.
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chandra thiagarajan
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Heather Wilkins 04 June 2013

lovely thoughts about the day with the family. Your last stanza is a delight to read.71462

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Chandra Thiagarajan 16 April 2013

I think all of didn't get down to the point which I did not emphasize and left it to the readers.It is that the family which was well knit all along, got split on resumption of power!

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Patricia Grantham 15 April 2013

A real family that stick together story written in a beautiful narrative poem. Family time is a time when everyone get together and share a special joy with each other. Love it.

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Valsa George 23 March 2013

The joyous turns and tedious chores of a joint family of parents, children and grand parents! The mother, uncomplaining and devoted, catering to the whims and tastes of her family members....reminding one of the selfless sacrifices, our mothers undertook for us..(which we are now unwilling to do for our children) ....Thanks for this joyous reminder of good old days! !

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Hardik Vaidya 20 March 2013

Chandra Thaigrajan you reminded me of days when i and my brother with mom and dad were used to be a small family in Calcutta, yes all the cooking was done by mom, and the eating and fun was done by us all. thanks for this gift back. there were no laptops then.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 March 2013

Family with love and affection is heaven. I like this poem most.

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