A Family Of Fat Cats (Obesity In American) Comments

This is foolishness this say nothing about obesity. i need to hear a poem on obesity like now not later this is crap! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I can picture it all so clearly. Even thoe the real cat doesn't know it he is the strongest of them all. nicely said

ted...............what a superb narration...............wonderful...

A great tale of the obesity plague very original and funny- pity the extremely fat people don't see there is no extremely fat old people they are only fodder for the grass the fat cat likes to lay on- will return to read more, regards Ken e Hall

very true. great write.

This poem kept making me think of a family of parade floats slowly having more and more hot air pumped into them while the crowd gawked in disgust. Sadly, however, the cat seems to make up the crowd in America these days. Very well written and funny, Ted

They're pretty smart critters cats, come to think on it I've never seen one heading for a Muck Donald's, or any other junk food venue...

'and their two and one third kids' << What the...? This line was great!

Somewhere out there a poem is floating about... about a lady in her finery, sitting in the churchhouse.. and a louse... is crawling up the ribbon of her hat..... And the poet (Burnes? Maybe? ?) said, 'if He had only gie us the gift to see ourselves as others see us.... I have to agree with MM/JC here! If we could only see ourselves...from the rear! !

good stuff ted. 'butterball'! ! ! - i may find myself stealing that word!

I took care of this problem the cat out living the wife n me made her as fat as us(a good 15 pounds) and I threw her off the roof 8 times so she’d catch up to us on that 9 lives table funny read liked

Okay Teddy Boy, this is ONE for the book!

Hehe...a delight to read...a funny ending...