Friday, May 28, 2010

A Family As A Whole Comments

Rating: 5.0

We are one family.
One nation, one world.
But why do we fight?
Why must we fight?
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Kylee Bartz
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Alex Robert 01 November 2010

you are an amazing writer...you can think so deep

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River..you are an amazing writer...you can think so deep..n that too at such an age...you are a true writer..God bless u...wish i could think as deep as u....

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Manolo Del Toro 08 June 2010

Kid you are great. heck I barely started talking at thirteen. You are a real poet, better than aldo kraas. Well I don't know if I gave you a compliment or insulted you.

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Claude H Oliver Ii 04 June 2010

Beautiful insight for one so young.

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Iron Panda 23™ 03 June 2010

truenesss.....beautifullll......likes this alot^-^

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Elias Barcelona 03 June 2010

A great way to look at the world and very well written keep em comin

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Lefix Onyango 02 June 2010

i love your work, out of 10, i would give you 11 for the work wee done

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Afzal Shauq 29 May 2010

a lovely global family concept and a sweet way expressed in poetic way..like the way you wrote..well done, ,10/10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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