I really thought you a friend.
I thought you were spun by the gods.
A golden thread to help mend
My broken heart against all odds.
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Hello Elia, Nicely expressed. I think we all have a false friend or two. They are the unlucky ones. Thank you and keep smiling
Great poem. Love the usage of short stanzas and syllables. I appreciate the effort you have made to get the rhyme and the rhyme patterns correctly. All round great poem, loved it.
I realized this I am old, beautiful. time is here, time is running out. Please read my new poems and comment.
A fickle friend hope is. Nicely written poem!