Wednesday, May 14, 2014

A False Friend Comments

Rating: 4.5

I really thought you a friend.
I thought you were spun by the gods.
A golden thread to help mend
My broken heart against all odds.
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Elia Michael
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Colleen Courtney 14 May 2014

A fickle friend hope is. Nicely written poem!

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Lyn Paul 14 May 2014

Hello Elia, Nicely expressed. I think we all have a false friend or two. They are the unlucky ones. Thank you and keep smiling

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Anand Brown 14 May 2014

Great poem. Love the usage of short stanzas and syllables. I appreciate the effort you have made to get the rhyme and the rhyme patterns correctly. All round great poem, loved it.

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Gajanan Mishra 14 May 2014

I realized this I am old, beautiful. time is here, time is running out. Please read my new poems and comment.

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Elia Michael

Elia Michael

Xylophagou, Larnaka, Cyprus
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