Tuesday, June 5, 2012

A Falling Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

A soul falling deeper
and deeper into despair
calling out for someone
to be there
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Dave Alan Walker
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Noreen Carden 17 September 2013

A great write Dave well done never was there a greater need for souls to unite than now enjoyed reading this

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Geetha Jayakumar 27 July 2013

Beautiful poem...Calling all souls to unite..Great write.

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Patricia Grantham 27 February 2013

Hello Dave: A thought provoking poem, this one really gets to the soul of the matter(smile) . I definitely like it! Thanks.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 17 February 2013

The poem is pure and sterling, motivating all souls to unite and be one! ! GREAT! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 25 June 2012

calling all souls to unite............special piece! !

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Captain Cur 18 June 2012

Rattle the chains. Short but potent. Lots of meaning here.

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Simon Collins 06 June 2012

This poem works for me, thanks

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Smoky Hoss 05 June 2012

Very good Dave, so well put!

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Heather Wilson 05 June 2012

Another soul for group therapy, a write to think about.good one.

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Eric Cockrell 05 June 2012

therein lies the hope of humanity! thought provoking!

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