A Fallen Tree Comments
Who will dance with the wind now that you're really gone?
Who will catch the sun's rays on the hot summer morn?
Who will slow down the gust when it's out of control?
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Who will dilute the air that's toxic to my soul? only your mother has the power to do so....this is my answer.
One of the most beautiful poem I have read about 'Mother'.Tree is like our mother who gives us food, shelter, shade, love and care ---A superb poem!
Who will speak to the clouds about sending the rain? Who will shelter me from the storm and soothe my pain? Who will stand in the rain when others hide away? ----One of the most beautiful poem about mother.
A lovely poem on love and funeral has been so touchingly and incisively delineated through question tags. I cite...... Who will speak to the clouds about sending the rain? Who will shelter me from the storm and soothe my pain? It is a great tribute to her whom you were loving much. Thanks for sharing.10
How is thank you so much for inviting me to read this. I know it reminded you of a poem that I had written but this is so much more elaborate and touching. I really loved it and it's a beautiful tribute to the one you love. It speaks so much from your heart and radiates from your soul. This is going to my favorites for sure.
Oh- - -10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and onto my fav list!
Lovely in its Loveliness. Lovely in the format you have chose, lovely in the questions you ask, lovely in the images your words convey, A heartfelt tribute
A heart touching tribute in remembrance of a fallen tree- a shelter, a provider, a protector, a purifier! The poem acquires a higher glory when the reader comes to know that it is written in remembrance of your demised mother. Absolutely brilliant!
Stupendous write, Howard. A great tribute to one of the most important components of our life cycle. The lucidity of your penning in this marvelous piece of work is utterly amazing..10++++++
Beautiful! Absolutely non-stop beautiful. We need to be thankful for these things that give us such simple and immediate pleasures because they certainly leave a hole behind them when they are gone. Fantastic poem, my friend!
Who will catch my rain drops before they touch the ground? Who will keep luxuriant grass from turning brown? ..............fabulous poetic expression my friend! In each couplet you have provided the reader to imagine the situation! Excellent piece of poetry! (10)
Who will dance with the wind now that you're really gone? Who will catch the sun's rays on the hot summer morn? Who will slow down the gust when it's out of control? Who will dilute the air that's toxic to my soul? Who will speak to the clouds about sending the rain? Who will shelter me from the storm and soothe my pain? - - - - - - - - - - - - - An exquisitely beautiful poem- - - - - - - Each line so touching ! ! I am almost in tears! !
Stunningly beautiful write so moving and heartfelt, this poem is on my favourites list!
A beautiful love in nature. Who will shelter me from the storm and soothe my pain? Thanks for sharing such an emotional poem....
Breath Taking Heart And Beautiful Soul! ! ! ! Is Understating! ! ! ! ! As Well As Numbers! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Love Continually Surrounds... Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! !
Rhythmic. Fascinating. Impressive. A poem to be read more than once.
Wonderful poem, only when a tree has fallen can new saplings can grow.
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7/19/2025 5:29:46 AM # 1.0.0
five ***** stars This is a very fine poem, but (referring to 'Topics') I find but 2 or 3 'alliterations'. : ) bri