A Fallen Leaf Comments

deep, smooth, refreshing, unique, a must for reading.

A fallen leaf brings out the warmth and glowing parts of your poem. The repetition makes it even more interesting. A very good write. Your friend Lynn

Its beautiful. Narration is so nice.

It is not clear why a fallen leaf loves you? The subject is interesting though.

its beautiful is this a song? sounds like a song for me. touchy romantic rhyme

A cute verse with deep sense...

wasnt knoing a fallen leaf can convey so much... loved it.. nice write..

A philosophical thought well expressed in verse! -Raj Nandy

wow nice write this reminds me...of one story in my lesson's which i read during my school days.. thanks for sharing.......

we can bring life into the fallen leaf too...great write

awwww i luv this one its remind me of someone wow well done 10+

A fallen leaf is not a dead one! - deserving to be with us! Great write!

Poetic nice flow good job good write

Try your work in some magazine of clasical work. It is worth printing.10

i liked this poem very much..keep writing and inform me of your new poems.

pick your fallen leaf and love it. a lovable poem with very good sounds

pick your fallen leaf and love it. a lovable poem with very good sounds

A fallen leaf art thou a fallen leaf am I fallen from the Kingdom of Lord sinned by hands of Nature just to nurture more children to please the Lord with Joy.

teap.It is beautiful, i just imagine the falling leaves......

Agree with loius.. good piece