A Fallen Feather Comments

feather falls and falls without a weight of worry

Those who sing bless us twice.1st they bless us with a poets words 2nd they bless us with a voice's music-it's a 10 from me

Softly as a feather caught on a gentle breeze, voice rises and falls, an Aria's emotions of love - Well written Cindy

'bring love's message O fallen feather! to all man's heart O fallen feather! ' Love and melodiou poem, love it.

Super soprano....zooming in high octaves blessed

Fine sentiments in tribute.....................................

Nice, keep it up. You've got skill, write a book.....

using a feather: light and airy, yet delicate as only love could be

wow i luv it it rhymics i luv way u did repititon on this poem keep it up

That poem is very interesting

nice lyrical poem with a great message

Great advice and suggestion to the fallen feather!

Feathered with a fine flow.

Good flow and I liked the repitition, well penned 10 Lynda xx

Nice flow GOOD job keep it up

The beauty of this poem is in its balance and brevity.10

repetition gives poems the sense of songs...great poem...by the way, if you can write songs you can post them on (songwritingfever.com) where music composers can compose music for people who write songs and poems...you can contact a composer and ask him to compose music for your poems..it will be great! !

Very good with climb up airs. your fallen feathers aureas

Oh fallen feather, dont worry. Soon a bird will take u and make a nest and lay eggs on you and u could be part of a happy home. Life is just ups and downs fallen feather.

it s a good one, i liked mostly the feelings in it.