Friday, February 27, 2015

A Fallen Bud Comments

Rating: 4.8

The child was unfortunately washed away by the tide
For after a prolonged struggle he had died,
Leaving his parents in a sea of shore-less grief
From where they can’t find relief, even tantalizingly brief.
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Josey Alfred 20 March 2015

A sad event indeed, death of an infant even after a long struggle, in spite of treatment and prayers, is unbearable and the pain remains for ever. Well scripted. May God bestow solace on every one.

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 March 2015

This is a very sad poem...nothing to be said, just prayers.

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 March 2015

This is a very sad poem...nothing to be said, just prayers.

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Valsa George 04 March 2015

The premature death of a sweet child at the most impressionable age when he/ she is the apple of every eye is such a shock..... May its parents get the strength to face this tragedy and recover from the loss! Very poignantly summed up!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 March 2015

Very perfectly titled and poignantly scripted with metaphor and touching words.........amazing write....10

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 02 March 2015

A very sad and poignant tale narrated in a very touching manner. May God grant solace to the bereaved family. Prayers.

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