Wednesday, August 26, 2020

A Fall From Grace Comments

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Somethings can only be felt.
Rain drops upon the skin.
The wind upon your face.
A bee sting in a rather not nice place.
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Susan Williams 26 August 2020

There is a deep river of darkness and sorrow running under this poem. Reading it hurts the heart because the poet is searching for a savior and not finding one. A man definitely Torn between heaven and. 10

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Deluke Muwanigwa 26 August 2020

Very true. Pride goes before a fall. If one is wrong one must say so apologize and not repeat it. But a lot including oft times we become arrogant. Touche

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