Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
Monday, February 13, 2012

A Fake World Comments

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I mourn
The fake death of the world
Whose humans are too blind to hear
Whose humans are too deaf to see
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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)
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Valsa George 18 September 2012

Often we feel that we live in a fake world... a world of sham and pretensions! ! If there are sensitive people like you who deplore such a state of affairs, that itself is a hopeful sign!

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Lusekelo Simwela 22 March 2012

Small enough to be shared Yet immense enough to be vandalise Souls vanquish at hand to tears Dreams vanish at hand to fears I mourn ....those lines are superb, u r a great poet

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Anil Kumar Panda 17 March 2012

it is the same feeling we experience in this world.so true.beautiful poem.

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Roong S 06 March 2012

Wow...this is so true!

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Pheko Motaung 18 February 2012

Well said Anele! You're a fantastic poet and a bright future awaits you!

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Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

Anele Potelwa (Unpublished)

South Africa (eDutywa, Mfenguland, staying in Cape Town)
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