Friday, April 25, 2008

A Fake Lifestyle Kills The Perfect Girl Comments

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Starting to drown in her fake personality,
Try to stay afloat, but she snaps back to reality.
Lipgloss, mirrors, designer clothes.
Everyday she has to be on her toes.
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Cora Lee
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Blue Eyes 21 September 2008

GIRLS DON`T LOOK LIKE GIRLS ANY MORE, I BELIEVE, AND WOMEN RIGHTS R WAY BETTER THAN MENS` ANY WAY, I LOVED YOUR POEM IT HAS MANY SHINY LINES

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Mark Nwagwu 26 April 2008

great write. you can't fake it with poetry for it is the soul of the person. fakes are fakes, neither poetic, nor allegorical, nor delightul, nor engaging, all of which i get from your poem

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Ray Lucero 25 April 2008

Cora Lee, Seeing perfection beneath the surface glitter is the first step to personal freedom. Bravo! Peace, Ray

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