Thursday, December 5, 2013

A Fake Heart Comments

Rating: 4.8

I live in a fake world.
I wake up on my fake bed,
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Nia Schexnider
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Captain Herbert Poetry 25 April 2014

This is highly poetic Great poem Please read and comment on my poems. Thank you

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Khairul Ahsan 22 April 2014

Loved your poem. Fakeness, vagueness, nothingness and emptiness of life well put across. 'Except the one thing I know for sure. .I'm empty.' - Very well said!

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