Thursday, August 13, 2020

A Faithless Quest Comments

Rating: 4.0

Should we have faith in a faithless quest
And put sheer foolishness to test

That the coconut holds some water
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Adams Elizabeth Oyarese
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L Milton Hankins 13 August 2020

This is a nice poem, but I wish you had stayed with he original rhyme scheme. Some of the couplets don't seem to work for me.

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