A Fairytale Comments
In the tender years she crept in life
When the mind was like the wet soil,
Ready to be impressioned and dried.
My untouched cogency, she did ripple and roil.
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simply a wonderful poem as superbly wrought by the metaphors yert luscious with dexterity, well pennedm,10+, thanks for sharing
a deep metaphor hidden under a fairy tale...., many would identify with it.
To teach a child to use its imagination is a priceless gift. I thorougly enjoyed this ivor
This is the kind of thing I'd love to see illustrated in a children's book. Great story, very clever.
What a wonderful gift you have. Wrapped up in rainbow lace and sprinkled in fairy dust. I believe I met you on Christmas Day. Another gift.
nice fairy tale; i am honoured that my ' Sun in conflict with the Moon' is also taking rounds in this poem; happy that it could impress people by touching their heart...nice poem
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7/21/2025 9:39:54 AM # 1.0.0
it's a wonderful personification...