Friday, September 16, 2016

A Fairy Tale With Doves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her heart bloomed as a rose beneath his velvety touch,
Which scared the little bird within her, so very much;
And she went hiding from his sight of burning love: —
Preferring the imaginary dream of a lovely dove.
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Mihaela Pirjol
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Rajesh Thankappan 24 September 2016

Without opening her wings and flapping it, the bird in love could not scale the heavenly skies and so takes refuge in poetry. Lovely poem and beautiful write.

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Mizzy ........ 16 September 2016

Very nicely written with great rhythm & rhymes... Producing a bitter/sweet melancholic air. Enjoyed reading!

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 September 2016

His velvet touch of love! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2016

Velvet touch has made bloom of heart as flower. Rose beneath heart beat spreads fragrance. Burning the love is here and dove is imagining lovely dream to touch heart again and again. Sadness of life to joyful liberty dove flies in open sky and perceives everything in life. Tender songs of love whispers on returning to nest. Very nice imagery is drawn in this poem. EXCELLENT poem this is...10

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