Sunday, December 14, 2008

A Fairy Tale: Prologue Comments

Rating: 3.1

He dragged his feet behind her,
from a heaven where they were
since everything did fail,
in this erroneous fairy tale..
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Subbaraman N V 03 January 2009

An enjoyable tale! Congrats!

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Reshma Ramesh 15 December 2008

well penned.......................

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Min Sia 14 December 2008

Very well narrated..fine imagery..can't wait for the next part! Really beautiful..A 10+++! Thanks for sharing...

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<font color =fusha>Amy 14 December 2008

fantastic poem, i really enjoyed reading this thanks for sharing 10!

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Fiona Davidson 14 December 2008

Well written piece....lovely...can't wait to read the next part....

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