Friday, December 19, 2008

! ! ! A Fairy Tale: An Encounter! ! ! Comments

Rating: 3.2

As a leave dropped on his forehead
his vision was simply led
by a carriage on a dusty road
carried a splendor hidden by a coat
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Reshma Ramesh 07 January 2009

the narration is excellent..............very well penned

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Subbaraman N V 07 January 2009

A great fairy tale! Thanks for sharing!

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Vaibhav Pandey 02 January 2009

very well penned...........

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Nikoru Bathory 27 December 2008

Yayyyy! ! this is what i've been waiting for (>_<) hurry and post the next part of the story, I'm looking forward for it (^o^) v *sry for my childish comments ^^'*

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Stephanie Fiddy 27 December 2008

beautiful imagery! i love it i give it a 10!

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Aijaz Asif 20 December 2008

a very beautiful imagery write with the use of strong metaphors....thanks for sharing 10 rgds

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Fiona Davidson 19 December 2008

Beautiful fairy tale...well written...thank you

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 19 December 2008

A fairy travelling on the rose petalled road, left on my heart, beautiful memories load......... Wonderful piece.......

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