As a leave dropped on his forehead
his vision was simply led
by a carriage on a dusty road
carried a splendor hidden by a coat
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Yayyyy! ! this is what i've been waiting for (>_<) hurry and post the next part of the story, I'm looking forward for it (^o^) v *sry for my childish comments ^^'*
a very beautiful imagery write with the use of strong metaphors....thanks for sharing 10 rgds
A fairy travelling on the rose petalled road, left on my heart, beautiful memories load......... Wonderful piece.......
the narration is excellent..............very well penned