A Fairy Tale Comments

wow allen what a great poem..i just come back to poemhunter i was been very busy..uve done a nice poem..keep it up..

Good going...I could feel ur emotion and pain...a solid 9.

lost in a bottle reminds one that they are afloat...and there is hope near by...that hope is love understood...faith known not...God is worth the lot...as is true love...the mirror only reflex...the the feeling...as a fairy tale enhance it...

A really beautiful one! ! !

with time you would be good. :)

An interesting Fairy Tale of love, since I love tales, I enjoyed the write!

Different tone compared to your previous writes. Feel is missing but well narrated.

Teasing and tormenting fairy tale of love! nice write

The poem sounds like a fairy tale. I felt like going back to the days I read fairy tales. Good work!

Whats love without pain? nothing good write

not bad man i think your a terrific writer. good job

you wrote this amazingly!