Friday, September 19, 2008

A Fairy Tale Comments

Rating: 4.9

Naked save for her delicate butterfly wings
She lays on a toadstool as mother nature sings
A posy of wild flowers held up to her nose
Long pixie slippers curl over her toes
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COMMENTS
Henry Brown 24 October 2009

Your words take me to the world of fantasy and the result I feel relax.10+++

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

A posy of wild flowers held up to her nose Long pixie slippers curl over her toes Rachel Ann Butler

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Duh Huh 21 May 2009

It is indeed a fairy tale. VIvidly painted in my mind as i read along with it. Thank you for sharing :)

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Chitra - 15 December 2008

a wonder trip through the rabbit hole, beautifully painted with resonant imagery

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**Pirate** Love*~Magic~Man 14 December 2008

you painted a miraculous fantasy world for Tinkerbel to play in.., T, i love it!

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I was intrigued with your name. Why Tia Maria! have you relatives in Brazil or Portugal? Wonderful poem! Congratulations

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Thad Wilk 01 December 2008

An enchanting poem Tia! ! Splendid imagery, a pleasure to read indeed! ! *10*! ! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Adeline Foster 30 October 2008

A lovely poem, Tia. I believed that Alice in wonderland thought. I wrote one once called 'Sunlight's World' but it was not as glittering whimsical. I shall have to look it up. Adeline

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David Desantis 03 October 2008

awesome imagery..i felt like i was either tripping on mushrooms or reading alice in wonderland haha EXCELLENT 10/10

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Adam Day 02 October 2008

splendid visual you painted for me Tia it brightened my day

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 01 October 2008

words painted into fantasy... :)

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Linda Moore 21 September 2008

I just love your Fairy Tale, mystical and magical creatures of light. It glitters with Fairy Dust.....10

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Tj Becker 19 September 2008

Poems like this make me smile. I love the magical fantasy world :) I'm no good at writing about it so I will enjoy it through you. This was amazing, the flow and rhyme was good but your imagery was excellent.You're a poetic artist and I really enjoy your paintings that I read :)

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 19 September 2008

Well you said it was Unusual Tia, but in a good way butterflys touching lips, I feel A poem coming on..lol Andy 10

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David Threadgold 19 September 2008

Hi Tia. Wonderful imagination a nice story in rhyme.10 Regards Dave T

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David Threadgold 19 September 2008

Hi Tia. Wonderful imagination a nice story in rhyme.10 Regards Dave T

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Kris Smith 19 September 2008

Beautifully written and a good place to be top marks 10

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Tia Maria

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