A Fairy Story Comments

LOL....I chuckled all the way through this one! ! ! It's absolutely wonderful! You've done a superb job! ! (I'll not be reading it at bedtime to my kiddies though! ! LOL) Hugs, Dee

What a wonderful read. I enjoyed every bit of it and laughed as well. Pam

This is quite funny, maybe a little crude, some would say controversial, but its alright...! !

Again, Archie, you have taken a new slant on the modern day fairy tale and made it into an extremely funny tale. WELL DONE!

The morning after the Princess Sleeping Beauty married the handsome Prince, the Queen came down to breakfast- And there sat the fair Princess in a state of dire distress, She cried, “Mother my life- my life`s in tatters, You should see my handsome prince, `twould make any woman wince, He`s so tiny in the only place that matters”. the love of a beauty in the cool snow -white night -and in the silent valley of my dreams- I wish to have a fragile lullable story again in your own way of verse

Bloody brilliant; Hilarious. This one really made my day, but I admire the amount of work and effort that has clearly gone into it.

Class, Archie. Pure class! Danny