A Fairy's Touch Comments
Faint fairy out of fantasy,
Draws out its slender wand
To touch the heart in its warm stead,
So to keep it running bright
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Faint fairy out of fantasy, Draws out its slender wand To touch the heart in its warm stead, So to keep it running bright Like the summer coming straight, Quick within like an ocean In its watery joy. Into it to sink deep in the heart, Where the glow charts Brightness to get the vibrancy. The smile from the light being Shows satisfaction. Effective alliteration and imagery create a wondrous introduction. The remainder becomes a stream of conscious perception of a brightness attempting to emerge from a hazy existence followed by a smile at its inception. Clarity got lost in the forest of similes. The last line is a climax to a crescendo that didn't develop.
Clarence Brown (11/6/2009 12: 19: 00 PM) I loved a fairy's touch ---------- wonderful. I have always imagined it so.
This is real poetry! ! ! ! And fairies are an endless issue for poetry! ! ! Congratulations! !
this is such a great poem because a fairy is a magical touch that warms a missn tooth amor which is love
excellent lyric poem, lovely to read this description of a...touch...10++++++++++
beautiful poem.the words are meaningful too.wonderfull imagination.enjoyed reading this poem. voted10 surya
One word, one thought: whimsical. great imagination put together into a nice little poem.
Enchanting, love the use of a fairy...very good write Obinna
a good and inspiring poem with rich idea...love it and hope my poems will also touch your heart...10 +++++
a beautiful poem with the hottness of summer caused by a fairy touchs..well done..10++++
Quick within like an ocean In its watery joy.... i love that line :) you got my 10 :)
now that is realy my type of verse..specialy liked this part 'Faint fairy out of fantasy, Draws out its slender wand To touch the heart in its warm stead' soo cool..i like maigic stuff..some say i live in a fantasy...who cares i like to live in them..so well expressed indeed..thanks for thr treatment 10+++
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7/20/2025 11:51:24 PM # 1.0.0
It's a powerful description with strong imageries. Economy of words is your key.I love the flow & the rendering.A good Romantic lyricist you are.Great work!