Thursday, May 22, 2014

A Fairy Came To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

A fairy came to me,
I was pleased to see,
She doesn't lack fame,
You know her name,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Khalid Saifullah 08 January 2015

A beautiful write.................10

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 December 2014

A great message of peace.....................

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Asma Hashmi 25 November 2014

Heart touching poem

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 September 2014

Initially thought it may be Malala ..but this is the beautiful poem it is the mirror of civilization

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 September 2014

I enjoyed reading this poem...so sweet!

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Jasbir Chatterjee 26 May 2014

nice poem...your notes given above are quite helpful...Life has this unfortunate way of balancing every good thing with just the opposite...Our own Bapu (Mahatma Gandhi) , the very embodiment of non-violence, was assassinated...thanks for sharing this poem...

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Amitava Sur 25 May 2014

A lovely emotional poem..... liked those emotional parts very much

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Valsa George 25 May 2014

A very lovely poem.... Simple and sweetly rhyming! Enjoyed reading it much!

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Ruma Chaudhuri 24 May 2014

I love to read it. But one thing I want to say that it brought tears to my eyes. Perhaps I get some similarities..... However, its really a nice poem. The inner meaning is so deep and I think it has a deep connection with our society. Mainly with the women in our society. However, nice poem. Best wishes. Ruma

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Hira Akhtar 24 May 2014

Such a beautiful poem! Hira

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Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

Love this poem! Seems so whimsical but runs so much deeper than that! Well done!

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