A Fading Dream Comments

A great poem dear madam...loved the adorable poetic expression. Top score.

Very interesting....what a dream that made you feel lost...! ! ..to be honest I like this dream of yours though it woke you up to cry in the middle of of your sleep....because of this dream only you have given us such a wonderful poem...as always your style of describing things is superb...a poem of great excellence.

A highly imaginative poem on dream and nature has been astutely and incisively painted. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thanks a lot.

(A Fading Dream by Valsa George.) **Sometimes it's good to get away; especially to such an utopia as is described in your poem. But nothing seems to rival that unique familiarity of family love and friendship. Thank you.

To my native land. Nice piece of work.

Beautiful poem dense with meaning.It remind me an italian film I saw when I was young. After 2 years away from my family I decided to go back home.Thank you fom the emotion

I am glad I found this it is delightful... pleasant wishes.

Imagination of Valsa is so high That one is required mental flights at a greater altitude. A nice poem.

Hello poet friend Valsa. I enjoyed your poem and thank you for the dream of fantasy and adventure, of longing and intrigue. It was great! Thanks for your recent reviews of my work. Loyd

Interesting piece of work. enjoyed reading it!

A great imagery..........Valsa.........almost a dream to be realized recedes.............such a great write.......you deserve for all your poems more than ten stars....

A lovely imagery. I t says a picturesque place even it's a fairy land feels good only for some time, but the real place of love and liking lies along with the known and loving people only, irrespective of a palace or a mud house..... very nice

a fantastic dream if it could only last. nice images

On the wings of imagination you entered the luring land of Nature away from fellow beings but just a true lover of humanity you missed warm embrace, a lovely write...believe sI too could experience ecstasy when reading through your poem.

OH, your senses, your feelings, your imagination have taken you along this voyage through the ocean of words! I You have managed to land again safely and join in your loved ones. I loved it! Good luck! Maria

Technical superiority with vast creative expression. A terrific poem!

A nice dramatic presentation of travel and nostalgia with the spirit of Lotus Eaters

Wow! I had a glimpse of true happiness the harmony and the peace of maybe afterlife. But yes how true we are here to care and love it doesn't matter if we touch the harmony or not. We are meant to bring the smiles and so we would not do anything to cause the otherwise. A lovely poem, full of beauty and depth thank you for share.

This time too you have begun with a good feel but soon have reversed it to render a touch of originality to the utopian land you have been to. The last line is very good as your hubby calls you darling and that reflects the equally good world you are living in. A poem that illustrates the apt use of poetic devices at your will.... Thanks for sharing Madam Valsa.

a metaphor of love A fantasy land with a magic spell Hidden away at Nature's veiled breast