Saturday, December 18, 2010

A Faded Picture Comments

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A faded picture
Full of hope
With mother and child
Ahead the unfurled road
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Brian Kilpatrick
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Roseann Shawiak 03 November 2014

Faded with each passing night Were only relived When they temporarily Came to light. Those lines particularly touched the sorrow of my heart. You have perfectly described how it feels to look at photos of the past and remembering loved ones temporarily - tears held closely in heart and mind. This is a poignant replica of these times of remembrance. Thank you for this amazing ooem and sharing it with us. RoseAnn

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Ben Burger 13 October 2011

Beautiful. Thats the only way I know how to describe your poetry

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Rich in realism. Well done my friend!

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Mehreen Tahir 18 December 2010

I just loved the last lines...beautiful!

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