Sunday, September 22, 2019

A Faded Flower Comments

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Tomorrow the sun may be more hostile,
Tonight the moon shows its last phase,
Stars will close this flower's profile,
Time had sprung it and time will erase,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 23 September 2019

Time had sprung it and time will erase, Time is a double edged weapon it gives birth through the earth and when it feels like it without remorse it buries Arose you depict to living memory let ts fragrance spread merrily The world will remember thee as the rose is preserved in your time's book in your everlasting memory may both live

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Aniruddha Pathak 23 September 2019

Ah what a beautiful poem this, A Faded Flower, the fate of every thing, alive or not, in this cosmos, and the wish of every living being. '

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 September 2019

Another great poem from a great Poet. Each and every stanza stands out depicting how life and love fade. Great imagery and rhyme. Onto my Poem List.

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Mahtab Bangalee 22 September 2019

there was the flower fresh bloomed on your coming path, there was the fragrance sweet-scented from you bower, there was me waiting wanderer with the pure washed heart for aligned love, now, there the flower, the path, the sweet scent, the me a force of defeated force for the love o the faded glory there are as the love lorn lover................///

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