Friday, July 23, 2010

A Face Looks So Carnivorous Comments

Rating: 5.0

A face looks so carnivorous
From the nostrils down:
An open, ravenous trap,
Half full or half empty
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Patti Masterman
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Jim Troy 09 August 2011

I guess it could be considered scarry. But then who knows what lurks in the halls (dining halls?) of others......Jim

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Kesav Easwaran 26 July 2010

wildly imaginative...but you restore some parity with your 'well breeding mare poem' down your page...leave writing poems while eating in a restaurant in the dark hours of the night! 10

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