Saturday, August 9, 2008

A Face Comments

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stainless steel glass memories visions i cant seem to shake from my mind the eternal constant vision of your gaze worthy face
the sight of your loveliness makes me celebrate one more day my feet are upon this earth
and curse it to the darkest pits of its black depths
yet i cannot help but weep at the knowledge that face will never be mine to memorize truly never to see that face within a crowd an silently scream my happiness and joy
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Anna jonson 27 August 2008

waaaw a very beautiful poem although it is very sad..

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Rebecca Mummery 09 August 2008

This is a very sad poem, but it's in detail, and the beauty described in it is rich and a pleasure to read. '...those cute ears make me long to whisper the truth of my feelings into them'. I liked that verse in particular. I like the way the pace has slowed when you finish with the short line that rounds it off. :)

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Paul Foulkes

Paul Foulkes

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