Friday, March 11, 2022

A Fable. Comments

Rating: 5.0

King Joshef built a beautiful church,
ordered his subjects
to come and visit the Lord.
People thronged from every
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Nabakishore Dash
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Dr Dillip K Swain 08 October 2022

Brilliant. Well done

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2022

A wonderful poem that shows our selfless work will make us through the kingdom of God.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2022

A well presented fable of great insight and wisdom. What is faith when we only seek for the holy place and pray without action. Bless are those who can show their faith in their noble works, acts and deeds.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 11 March 2022

Excellent poem I really enjoy it Bravo!

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Nabakishore Dash 11 March 2022

Many thanks revered Azzopardi.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

3. I have narrated another fable, in 5 parts on PoemHunter, by name "A Farmer's Life". May I invite you to read it. Thank you.

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Nabakishore Dash 11 March 2022

Thanks for your appreciation.certainly I shall read your fables and other poems poet Unnikrishnan.

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

Your God is within yourself, as is the fragrance within a flower. Then, why are you searching Him outside, like a musk-deer searching for the smell of musk in the grass, while the smell, the musk emanates from its own body?

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Unnikrishnan E S 11 March 2022

As Sant Kabir said, "Tera Sayee Tujhmein/ jyom puhpan mein baaz// Kasturi ka mirag jyom/ phir phir thoondhe khaas."

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