Thursday, January 14, 2010

A (F) Lashback Comments

Rating: 2.8

That night our anger and pain
took the shape of a rain
poured down - lashing slaps
in the face of blooming daisies
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Ruby Honeytip 03 January 2013

This is great writing.....full of ashamed regret x

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Hans Vr 22 May 2010

A master of language You know exactly how to put feelings in a melodious way full of wonderful metaphors. I had a wow experience upon reading this poem very nicely written

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C. P. Sharma 20 January 2010

There is pleasure in pain When the being is soaked in rain, The daisies' celebrate self sacrifice Why to feel ashamed? CP

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 14 January 2010

Flowers are sexual symbols. Nocturnal jasmins open overnight in Giovanni Pascoli. Dino Campana was in search of roses together with Sibilla Aleramo and argued those weren't their roses. Robert Burns was a nice Scottish guy and sang 'red, red rose' in front of a pint. About wet daisies by Onelia Avelar...it looks a picture by an Impressionist...I leave them to you.

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