Monday, January 7, 2008

A) . Every Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

Every day the mind ticks faster than the clock
Gathered thoughts confuse the troubled mind
Half truths blind the future blessed
questions rebound to the one who asked
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Bill Smith
COMMENTS

You put a lot of thought into this poem, the words and verse, the subject all flow well.

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Matt Pocock 13 January 2008

Profound and yet personal: Brilliant.

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Jolanta Gradowicz 12 January 2008

very interesting thinking expressed in the poem.

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Fallen Too Far 07 January 2008

Beautiful imagery! Oh that I had half the talent! Such beautiful thoughts it creates upon the reader, almost forcing them to be thought and yet laid out so tenderly! ! Clearly genius! thank you

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