A Enemy / A Friend. Comments

This is the real fact you have written. i like it.

Nicely done. So many reasons to appreciate our friends and how to be a friend.

ausome dude, i look forward to reading the rest of your poems

I also agree with 'paige scott'.. But i really like this poem..

I see you're not rich, You have friends you can trust. Me, too.

Much true but friends are more at power to hurt! coz we love them.....Whatever an enemy says never hurt us but a friend in a slightest comment on you! it can be deadly!

i agree with 'paige scott' it would go better if you used an instead of a.. but other than that brilliant! luv lisa xo : -)

It wasn't bad! Pretty nice. But I do think that it would flow better if you used one grammar rule and wrote ' an enemy' rather than 'a enemy.'

its so true, I know i need more friends in my life, good work!

your poem speaks the truth Jose. Keep up the good work. If you haven't done so already you should write one about the friends that make you not need enemies, if you catch my drift!

very true, I loved it! Excellent juxtaposition and rhyme as well keep writing fella

A lot of wisdom in a list of life lesson from someone so young, seems you have a good head on your shoulders.Don'T ever stop writing.A very good job.

I like this poem, you bring up a lot of good points. We are lucky that friendship is possible in this existence and lucky that there are enemies we can learn from. They both show us where we are weak and where we are strong, bless them both.

This poems give me hope that not everybody in the worlds out to get you

yes, a true condition, a great write from you..

lovely it sounds great.nice writing

a friend can say...'sarap mo'ng tadyakan..' when you are wrong, ha ha! Good one!

This is all so very true! I Like it!