A Ebony Stallion Comments

this poem isamazing, it really acpturesthe essence of the stallion. beautiful descriptive write

Thanks for your advise! Clay

Great poem, I liked it a lot. Just one little thing: 'the snow covered grass field, ' These verses should be merged, I think. The stanza would flow better, then. And you could also substitute 'grass field' with meadow, or ommit 'field'. A mere suggestion ;) Again, good job with the poem.