Tuesday, April 24, 2012

A Dying Nation Comments

Rating: 4.5

My nation was God's foundation,
Blessed to be founded in this universe,
We all know that's the truth,
Until I saw its devastated form,
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Dr. Yogesh Sharma
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Walterrean Salley 04 May 2012

Dr. Sharma, I intended to vote 10, but I mistakenly pressed 9. I apologize. But for the sheer nature of the poem, it deserves a 10++.

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Walterrean Salley 04 May 2012

A very touching poem. So viv and well written. I wish the best for you and your homeland {nation}.

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