A Duty Now To Die Comments

It is a rather remarkable declaration, and explains - and justifies - very clearly the structure and content of this very interesting piece of poetry. As if the aged don't feel guilty enough.

Ah, yes - Lipitor. The cure-all for hyperlipidemia. If you can tolerate the muscle aches and the inflammation of your liver, you just may live another few years. Or until they find that it causes shrinkage of the brain cells, or some other such unpredicted malady. Pick your poison, that is, if you can afford it! I'm leaning toward alternative medicine - may be alot safer in the long run. Nice write, Herbert. Linda

Thanks for the kind words but the story is in the poem. Governor Richard Lamm of Colorado made the infamous statement 'The elderly have a duty to die'. That was the inspiration. Best H

I love this poem Herbert but please tell me the story around it will you? Seamus

I was rather unprepared for this marked switch in mood, Herbs. Dark but strong piece of writing with skill in the characterisation of the protagonists in particular. I don't care to discuss the message - too disturbing. Let me wish you goodnight. Goodnight, Herbs. G.