Let the smile in someone's wrinkles answer your youth
which is hidden still, might in a rose bud's chill
that life is a flower and will bloom sooner
than a glimpse of love that costs you to believe
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I love the interplay between tear, smiles, and fears, and- as always- your inventive ability to work arrangements of meaning in creative patterns to shed new light on common thoughts.
I enjoy reading this one. You are quite skillful in making new structures.
A strong believe in oneself can let you achieve wonder. Very beautifully done. Loved it.
Really beautiful poem, I love how much you've woven into it.