Saturday, July 28, 2012

A Duplicate Of Many Swords Comments

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I know what you are my dear
I know subdued solace behind your steel doors and sword fences
The shine of metal only cuts inward of wood
Tell me can your splintering heal? ...
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Mimi Mata
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Ray Quesada 12 October 2012

Seriously Mimi, you are a wonderful writer. Please read more of Pablo Neruda when you have a chance. The use of words like, HUNGER, DESIRE, and also the images of types of fruit - these are all parts of a lot of the poetry by Neruda i've read. you have to read more of him...it's all so elegant, and so are you

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Captain Cur 28 July 2012

Fresh strong wooded visually enticing poem. Good write.

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San Diego, California
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San Diego, California
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