A Dry Plant Comments

Hi, sad poem, it touches deep inside of me. t had hapened to me. it was so hard. Keep on, you're a good composer!

The title of this poem really attracted to me to it, and went with the poem perfectly. I would not even think to change that! Great job!

heart touching and a very interesting, very emotional poem! ! !

Why should you become a dry plant waiting in wasted days...too emotional...love is such...nice to read

A true love comes from within, and it clearly stated here. Nice delivery of the lines helps the poem to be more enjoyable to read... Keep it up.. I rated you 9.

this poem is like true to the heart it's like this was written from the soul; wonderful and perfectly written.

vow! great love.love poem.keep it up. voted10 surya

A beautiful poem, lovely write.

beautiful, blue eyes, but you should not write about love anymore...

greatly written and expressed. id like to see more =)

GREAT....BRILLIANT...IT IS FULL OF EMOTION....KEEEEEEEEEP WRITING MAN; :) ..

Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem.

Congralutation, it's wonderful very nice.Best wishes dear poet and thank u for sharing.

This is really good..

nice simile of words, with fine diction and melancholic mood...beautiful vivid piece of sadness...10

my gosh, this almost brought me tears, because sometimes your love for somebody you truly care about can never go away, and it lingers on you for soo loongg, until it eventually drains everything thats in you, slowly depriving you from the life you once had. nice piece. it really struck something in me. =) absolutely a 10+

Really good flow, it draws you in tell the end, and it made me feel that. really nice write.

this almost made me cry.this is a very good poem that i feel everyone including me can relate to

this almost made me cry.this is a very good poem that i feel everyone including me can relate to

this is a very good poem! keep with it...you're a really good poet!