A Drowsy Afternoon Comments

I, too, love the countryside and appreciate these words all the more for it. You have an enviable gift of painting pictures with words.

Wow........... What a panorarmic view captured in your beautiful words. Really Enjoyed. Has a sleepy quality all of its own Steve

A beautifully described scenic write. I enjoyed reading this awsome poem.

I really love this one, pure quality. '10' Andrew x

another wonderful write of yours, Ern..enjoyed reading from end to end..

Just what I neede to read this cold and wet december day.Thank god for memories of happier times

Great imagry once again Ernestine, you paint a most beautiful picture here with the use of your very discriptive and colorful words, excellent poetry from a fabulous poet.---Melvina---

a drowsy afternoon is what today is, once again it is snowing. reading this poem, brings me really see what you are saying. it is a very fine piece of work, that you have written, nice one Ernestine, take care.

A vision of bygone days in the most natural of scenery - not easy to find anymore! High quality artistry.

Loved the poem from the beginning to the end.A masterpiece certainly! ! Love...TO

This was the most blissful read I've had for ages. Loved it, Ernestine! And those bees are still buzzing and streaming in the heat. xL

Ernestine: This is a beautiful poem- what a picture you have painted here. I love the imagery and the clean completeness of it. I want to go take a nap now-lol. Lovely, lovely! Blessings-TGR

And then.I woke up.In a cold bedsit in the middle of winter down by the docks in Liverpool.Not the buzzing of bees but the mystic warble of police car sirens.Still one can dream.Nice one Ernestine. I remember days like that when I was 6 years old near my parents holiday cottage at LLangwynaddle on the Lynn peninsular in North Wales. Best wishes. Sid xx.

I just wanted to lie back and take a nap. How peaceful this poem is in our world of hurry, hurry. Scarlett

dear ernestine, your poetry does have a lot of life in them.

The choice of your words with their sounds create a drowsy atmosphere that copies that of the afternoon. A lovely poem.

Something reborn in this beautiful poem of love and hope. Very precious moments.Thankyou Ernestine.I truly Loved the feelings in this.Love Duncan

Hmmmm... Kind of feels like my afternoon... =) dan

Deeply sweet and expressive... thank you for posting it.

Absolutely lovely Ernestine! A treasure for the heart, ear and eye and a transport into tranquility for the soul. Hugh