A Dropped Flower Iam, To The Streams Again...... Comments
Dark clouds coverd the skies
Heavy rain filled the nights
Beside the stream of unclean water
As a dropped flower I just laid
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sad ending, .but the poem is beautiful..the expression is well planned, presented clearly...grace
ouchh...seems i was reading a roller coaster love-affair.. sad and convincing.... described a picture vividly.. a picture of a love's ups and down really convincing...great ideas... thoughts' impressive 10+++
a love story so tragic...beautiful narraton, Sebastine...thanks...10
in our lives, there are bloopers.. dont let her stand alone dont let her tears roll down always remember, you have a good heart and am really sure, even if she walks away you had captured her heart..
ooh...my sebastine, , what a happy sad written, , surely touches lol when d one love you and leaves you, , , soo sad at the end. d'nt worry i'm here to cry on.
hey beautiful write....so much of ache can be seen in the heart of the guy...life and love cant be chase anyday, anyway..if one leaves means god has planned much better....so be open to life and love too! ..easier said than done....coz heart nevr listen to what the reasoning mind says..........but at times need to! ! .....much true write....
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7/18/2025 4:02:27 PM # 1.0.0
a rather heartfelt poem I enjoyed it.