Wednesday, February 6, 2019

A Droplet In Sea Comments

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My ego rising tall from a plane lay,
I often feel, the world warms to my song,
To play a second fiddle, lost in fray,
And I conduct orchestra all day long.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 06 February 2019

depicted the wold so beautiful- The world's now bathed in radiance all new, Beauty and bliss welling up from within, And a window emerging with a view, /// this is the strength of poet

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Yes Mahtab Bangalee, you have picked the right lines. On knowing that one realises Man a mere point is in infinity, And world looks at him as nonentity. Thank you.

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M Asim Nehal 06 February 2019

You nailed it with this poem, ego is the greatest enemy of man. The world's now bathed in radiance all new, Beauty and bliss welling up from within, And a window emerging with a view, That lets me see a world never ere seen. Man a mere point is in infinity, And world looks at him as nonentity.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

You're spot on Mohammed Nehal, PH has such knowledgeable readers. Thanks for your feedback.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 February 2019

My ego rising tall from a plane lay.....captivating opening line! A beautiful poem carrying sparkling poetic expression....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Thank you Dr Swain for your encouraging feedback.

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