A Drop On A Lotus Leaf Comments

Excellent metaphors and great message to mankind.kindly keep on writing, may change some, not the whole world.

A gentle heart touching poem I liked the undertone

Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing.

Nice and a descriptive write, thanks for sharing. take care

Verily a lovely similitude expressing the essence of life

Life is like water drops Wobbling on lotus leaf. Short lived and uncertain Like the dew on the grass tips. Amitava, profound verse! i loved the lines for its deep philosophy. Hearty Congratulations on the 100th poem! When life is like a drop on lotus leaf, have we time for anger, hatred, jealousy etc. There is place for everybody on this earth. So, let us live in harmony with love and compassion. Wonderful poem with wonderful thoughts.

there is great wisdom in your words our lives is like that drop in a lotus leaf thanks

Very poetic... A water bead on lotus leaf - Shimmering with a glow... creates vivid images... wonderful!

This poem is superb, I think written with gud experience and observation.

.............very nice imagery...beautiful comparison ★

your well penned poem is a bright portrayal of the uncertainty, fragility and also brevity of life, along with a universal message: don't waste your life, but live all your days fully and in peace with yourself and the others.. We should remember such a message each and every moment..

Good poem about the ephemeralty of human existence. We written and analogically apt.

Enjoy life without harming others...beautiful truth sir. thanks for sharing sir

another superb simile on life. Good job! I enjoyed reading through

Dear poet, A drop on a lotus leaf I have read..You have told a great philosophical truth in a very simple manner. Great write...Thank you.

A wonderful 100th poem. I really felt the fragility and beauty of life as I was reading this. Thank you.

Stunning write, life is fragile and beautiful you have created a poem of unique beauty! Congratulations on your 100th poem and best wishes!

It reads even better the second time around. bursting with a beauty that is rich, robust and refreshing!

Beautiful, absolutely beautiful! Had ti read it once again!!!!

A wonderful poem which is so true to life.